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Edges are done and I've changed the position and size of the text as you've suggested. :)
Maybe move up the tagline some more?

Better now?

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I like the new version more. The tagline looks better in two line I think, maybe like this?

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Post by sauron »

Looks much better now and the suggestion by JC is awesome.
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Post by Zungam »

The TT up top looks great :)
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Fidi84 wrote:
QUOTE (Fidi84 @ Aug 18 2014, 05:43 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
@ sxxo:
It's not only grey:
But do you have something different in mind?

I has talking about the actor´s name and quote.
Right now, they are too similar (in colour) to the TT.
The TT looks great up and i agree with JC (two line for the quote).
Keep on :)
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Post by venome »

Much better ;)
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Post by JollyRoger »

A little more color, perhaps? :)

Great start!
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Post by xshoty »

Look really good m8 ! maybe enlarge a bit Whalberg ? :D
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Post by Fidi »

jcdesign wrote:
QUOTE (jcdesign @ Aug 18 2014, 07:59 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
The tagline looks better in two line I think, maybe like this?


Thank you for this idea, it looks really good! :)

Sxxo wrote:
QUOTE (Sxxo @ Aug 18 2014, 11:55 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I has talking about the actor´s name and quote.
Right now, they are too similar (in colour) to the TT.


I'll think about this when the back is done. Right now I have no idea how to change it.

JollyRoger wrote:
QUOTE (JollyRoger @ Aug 19 2014, 02:07 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
A little more color, perhaps? :)


I've increased the saturation about 30%. Better now?

xshoty wrote:
QUOTE (xshoty @ Aug 19 2014, 04:18 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Look really good m8 ! maybe enlarge a bit Whalberg ? :D


I'm afraid this isn't possible. The image quality is not the best. It's the original size at the moment. If I'll enlarge him I'll get in troble with the image I think...


Little Update:

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I've stamped away the logos on the crane and a few little other adjustments.
And of course I've used your suggestions where possible (tagline, color).
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Nice start :cheers:
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