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pytlaczek wrote:
QUOTE (pytlaczek @ Nov 6 2013, 10:51 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Maybe this arrangement on the front? Nothing is not yet cut out.

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This looks a lot better! Keep going :)
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Very nice like this !!! Maybe make the focus a bit on the character cause now the two character and the house have the same importance on the front... Not sure if you understand what i said ...
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Wow what a difference, well done bro :) keep going!
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Wow what a difference, well done bro :) keep going!

:iamwithstupid: but I think the guys need some color to them
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I think you should/could if you want to... Move Will Smith up slightly, make Gene Hackman bigger and move up also! Make the TT bigger and move up a bit giving a bit of space undeneath it for a tagline or some sort of small action scene? I think the border to the left side is overdoing it at the moment and the white building needs rotating to the left slightly to straighten it up? What is that in the background that looks like the london eye?
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I'm tempted to ask why have that building as a background? Can't remember the film all that well but i think it does distract from the scene of hackman controlling smith so to speak which i think you'd be better off focusing on. A bit or orange and red could work?
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Yup, much better like this :)
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Wow! Thanks for the suggestions!
Although more i can guess than understand, i'll try to work on that. Simple sentences pleeeease! :D

I used Capitol's because I associate with political intrigue. Tomorrow I'm free to sit on the front...
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pytlaczek wrote:
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Tomorrow I'm free to sit on the front...


That was a funny sentence :giggle:

Google Translate treats you badly sometimes my friend :)
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Eeech... :shrug: :hb:

Have a great time hehe. :P
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