The Dark Knight Rises

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Post by delek »

Very nice, good tips from JR
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Good stuff so far :D
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Post by wysmommy »

Great start, Jpeg! :)

I agree - the characters could be a bit darker. It might also look nice if you could enhance the explosion logo thingy in the background, and perhaps add a small amount of orange/yellow glow to the characters?
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Explosion enhanced and enlarged some...character levels adjusted....but look too dark
to me.....could just be my monitor though.

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Post by RookerDesigns »

Looks great.. are those toys?

! thing though, feels really busy...
I love the concept though. Look forward to an update
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Post by JollyRoger »

perhaps some adjustments?


* levels
* saturation
* brightness
* contrast

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Post by wysmommy »

I think RP has a valid point. It is an amazing background, but it's a bit busy. Perhaps try a slight blur to the background, and also add a lower opacity vingette so that you can see the background, but it's not as busy? :)
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Still adjusting......and a better preview. Thanks wsmommy...lightened up the background and will try your other suggestions.

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I like the update. :)
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Post by Paris »

The front looks amazing :D
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