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Posted: Wed May 16, 2012 8:01 pm
by wessim
Tried that jpeg but on the right i realy like the hamer of Thor so i tried to make that side bigger but it didn't look right.

Hows this

oh and i worked on the bullits ;)

Edit: Want to give Nr idea a change so bring the lightning bold back but behinds Thor neck working or should i remove it

Posted: Wed May 16, 2012 8:46 pm
by Zungam
I like the lightning, but right now it looks like it's going through his left shoulder/under his hair. What if you shortened the left bolt, ending it at his chest, and increased the right bolt, going right, around and behind his cape and left shoulder and up (without having it in front of Samuels face)?

Posted: Wed May 16, 2012 9:17 pm
by Sxxo
I agree about the lightning and the bullets.
Other than that, it's a great front Wess :)

Posted: Wed May 16, 2012 10:35 pm
by sauron
Thors hammer looks like it is floating in mid air as you can't see him holding it.

Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 12:23 am
by M0vieM0nster
Nice start :)

Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 2:55 am
by Nightrider
agree with the guys above bud, really good solid design just needing those couple of minor tweaks. I think what Z says about the lightening is a really good point.
Bullets look a lot better, though I think they could still reduce by about 20% ?
Also the Surnames with the gradient while looking cool might prove a bit hard to make out when printed, possibly all white, or just off white could be a thought?

Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 11:02 am
by JollyRoger
I dunno if those bullets work, sry bud. They kinda look like flying dildos... :chin:

Also I think you should work on the levels of Hawkeye and Thor. Keep going bro! I know you'll get there in the end! :cheers:

Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 11:26 am
by Kernie
JollyRoger wrote:
QUOTE (JollyRoger @ May 17 2012, 07:02 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I dunno if those bullets work, sry bud. They kinda look like flying dildos... :chin:

:iamwithstupid:

The size of the bullets are disproportional to the size of the guns. You'd probably be better off just putting muzzle flashes over the guns and not showing bullets at all. How often is the human eye able to see a speeding bullet? :D :D :D

Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 11:48 am
by wessim
I saw a great tutorial from you (kernie82) about the gunfire maybe i'll do that actualy i did something wrong with that tut and thought about the bullets.
Worked on the levels and made the hand of Hawkeye more vissible.
Also reworked the lightning and did what Z said.
@nr: I tried the actor names in white and off color bud it didnt look good so i made what i had lighter.

Edit: After looking at it again i think you probably right i remove the bullets and hope that i can give it some sort of an gunfire effect

Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 1:31 pm
by wessim
Removed the bullits added a bit of gunfire. (thnx Nr for the psd with some adjustments i think this looks good)

worked on the lightning of the hammer