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Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 4:41 pm
by virtual games
good .

Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 8:43 pm
by wessim
added another character.
Now let see how i can screw this up, with my font choices

Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 8:47 pm
by Sxxo
You go Wess, this is coming nicely

Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 9:48 pm
by wessim
thnx bud
update, hows the tt like this?
Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 12:39 am
by JollyRoger
Very nice, but a bit too close to the bottom edge IMO.
Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 1:56 am
by Paris
I have an idea, I'll make a mock-up

Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 2:51 am
by M0vieM0nster
Loving how this is shaping up, great work so far buddy

Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 10:41 am
by Zungam
Excellent start on this one, wess! I like the TT, but maybe move it a bit up like JR said.
Think you need to work some more on the shadows from the people to the left and right. Since the sun is behind Luke, I think the shadows need to follow that path a bit more (if you know what I mean?). The other thing is the lighting/shadows on the guy to the left. Maybe it would look better if you flipped him horizontally so that his left side (which is brighter) is on the same side as the sun.
Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 2:17 pm
by wessim
thnx guys adjusted the shadows flipped the left man over moved the tt up.
added some bulletholes on the tt.
Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 2:25 pm
by Droogs
looks good mate, I think the bullet holes need tweeking a bit, the kinda just look like holes at the min, maybe makin the edge darker. could also see what itd look like with smoke comin out of a bullet hole, like its just been fired.
this is lookin great mate, keep up the good work