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K, took onboard the suggestions above.

Better?

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Of the two TT's I prefer the original, but maybe it would work better in white? The combination of orange, green and then a red TT doesn't look good imo.

Other than that the front has grown on me. Looks fresh and original, and with the right typo this could work.


Edit: And suddenly a new preview was posted :)
Looks cool! What if you used the original TT but in the same color as this one?
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Post by M0vieM0nster »

Getting there ;) still not sold on the font though :(
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M0vieM0nster wrote:
QUOTE (M0vieM0nster @ Oct 27 2011, 05:55 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Getting there ;) still not sold on the font though :(

Zungam wrote:
QUOTE (Zungam @ Oct 27 2011, 05:50 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Of the two TT's I prefer the original, but maybe it would work better in white? The combination of orange, green and then a red TT doesn't look good imo.

Other than that the front has grown on me. Looks fresh and original, and with the right typo this could work.


Edit: And suddenly a new preview was posted :)
Looks cool! What if you used the original TT but in the same color as this one?



Like so?

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That works better imo :)

Not sold on the font used for tag and actors though. Maybe something more similar to the TT?
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Hmmm fonts don't usually escape me so... :chin:


Better like this?

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Post by wessim »

this is shaping up nicely. And i like the tt and the tagline but not sure of the actor names.
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Hum...

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Post by venome »

looking good, i have no suggestions for the actor names but the TT seems a bit small :)
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Post by JollyRoger »

DAMN! This text is killing me!!! :D :D :D

Better? (credits are from scan, and is just a placeholder).

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