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Hey all...

Thanks Gabo!

So I removed that lined blue image from the back and came up with this instead... I am actually surprised it worked out so well, the image of her with the wings was a lot of work to fix!

Thoughts?

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Hey all, here is what I've got now...

So, I added screens and found a logical separation for them with the tail. Was going to add some blue to the screens, but i didn't like it, plus it took away from the blue in the wings.

I have two previews here because a friend of mine recommended that I try the blood in red to add a slight red element that would catch someone's eye. Also it gives a hint that not all is right in the movie.

Oh, yea, almost forgot again... was going to ask if anyone thinks I need a pic on the spine, or does it work as it is? I kind of like it but not sure 100%.

Thoughts? Which works better?


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I think it's looking really sharp i love the way you blended the screen caps within her tail. And the blue in the wing is super sharp.
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Thanks RRJR!
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Big big improvement Ford! So far so good!
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I'm personally not keen on the blood but if I had to pick one with blood I'd pick #2. Even though i usually prefer to have a pic on the spine I don't think you really need one because of the design for he background, but if you find a really cool pic that will stand out and blend nice i'd go for it.
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Thanks RRJR!

Yea, I have to have the blood either way cuz it's on the mage, but thanks for the choice!

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QUOTE (RRJR84 @ Oct 15 2010, 10:55 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I'm personally not keen on the blood but if I had to pick one with blood I'd pick #2. Even though i usually prefer to have a pic on the spine I don't think you really need one because of the design for he background, but if you find a really cool pic that will stand out and blend nice i'd go for it.
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Have you thought about blurring the background so the letter aren't that visible (like on the front)?, cuz they're really distracting
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The image started out that way, and I wanted to keep it in focus on the one side so you could tell what it is... Hopefully the update looks good!

K, here it is:

I think I have come to a decision with the blood, but not convinced yet... I did the red to add an interesting layer of color to a two-tone cover... Might not be for everyone, but might just be what I go with, we'll see!

I've also decided to go with no spine pic, I think the spine already has elements on it that work :)

Added the rest of the text and evened out the BG lighting more...

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I think it's perfect you hit a home run here great job.
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