Prince of persia

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Post by voetzoeker »

Did some work on the background and sands

also took down the color on his eyes and adjusted the glowing edge mask

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Post by Krabban »

Looks great my friend. I - on the other hand - personally think you should skip the tagline on the front, get started to fill the back and of course finish it up with a nice spine.

Can't wait to see the back filled with deliciousness. ;)

Good luck with the rest!
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Post by jcdesign »

Looks like the movie is animated. Almost like a game cover. But perhaps it should be so! Otherwise it will be certainly great.
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Post by felipe-11 »

Nice, his eyes look way better now :) I myself like the tagline, keep it up!
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Post by Irrob »

I dont like the tagline there either. I like everything else!
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Post by voetzoeker »

Thanks guys for the comments

Removed the tagline and moved things around a bit.

Started on the back and added a spine :)

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Post by M0vieM0nster »

Looks great, the only thing i'm not sold on is the font used for the cast names on the front.
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Post by Punisher34 »

The font used for the the cast names on the front and the "from the producer of..." needs to go. It throws off the whole retail vibe your going for, as of now it looks very, ehh.
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Post by JollyRoger »

Punisher34 wrote:
QUOTE (Punisher34 @ Sep 6 2010, 09:03 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
The font used for the the cast names on the front and the "from the producer of..." needs to go. It throws off the whole retail vibe your going for, as of now it looks very, ehh.


While not very helpful, I have toi concur. Perhaps you could elaborate a bit on your comments P43? Would be very helpful ;)

For font choice I'd switch to a serif font that matches 'The Sands of Time' Better, perhaps even the same, Vz.. The rest looks as usual mighty fine :arms:
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Post by felipe-11 »

The back looks great but I agree about changing the fonts on the names and tagline, they just don't seem to match very well.
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