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Posted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 9:56 am
by JollyRoger
Althought the front image is great, I think the balance of the front is off. I'ts too heavy on the right. Adding a tagline on the left side could balance it.
Posted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 10:37 am
by sauron
Here is another update, still don't like the synopsis... any ideas on what to do with it?
Posted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 10:59 am
by JollyRoger
Tagline on the front is too big, and positioned to high.
Too many gabs in the synopsis on the back.
Posted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 12:17 pm
by sauron
Okay cool, thanks mate.
The synopsis is only put there to show what synopsis im using... i'm not sure where to position it, any ideas?
Posted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 12:19 pm
by JollyRoger
I think you should come up with the whole back layout before getting stuck on just the synopsis....
Posted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 12:51 pm
by easylife
Dont like the caps on the synopsis, and like JR says, its too gappy. tried a gradient on it, like on the TT, so the darker grey would show up better on the white and light grey on the darker blue. prefer the claw where you have it now
Posted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 1:09 pm
by sauron
The synopsis is in caps because thats how the font is, what font would you recommend i use?
Is the synopsis placement better?
Posted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 3:07 pm
by chefjoe
m8 try to get your syp into a single box shape up top instead of the L shape you now have, Eurostile may be a better font, or maybe a serpentine, and keep working those gaps, you may need to alter the syp abit, but what the hell, better than gaps. Love where you've placed the claw.
Posted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 6:07 pm
by THE GOOD GUY
im not a fan of over loging things, I would take the fox emblem off the spine and race the spine pic
Posted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 7:13 pm
by voetzoeker
You need to use a font that is not Capitalized for synopsis.
i would place the synopsis, next to the claw, use the pen tool to make a box that follows the tearing on the left and keep it straight on the right
keep it minimal 5 mm from the edge .
then you'll have room on top for a nice critic quote or tagline.