Memento

[jcdesign]

The gun is great and I think you can put some small polaroidpictures spreading on the ground.

[bpmford]

Looking great bunny, nice and clean just the way I like!

[wysmommy]

Looking good.. I like the gun, nice touch. First thing that comes to my mind on this movie is tattoos, and Polaroids. Hope you can add those in somewhere.

[HalfBreed]

Looking killer Bunny, but i gotta say i like jannecover's idea scattered Polaroids on the ground would look much better and would also suit the movie well as he has a lot of Polaroids scattered in his apartment if memory serves me right.....chaotic like....get my meaning?

[Bunny Dojo]

I'm trying not to get too carried away with the photos. They're definitely a big part of the movie, but he only uses maybe 5 or 6 total throughout the movie (I know because I foolishly tried to re-create them ), so I'm probably going to stick with the few I've got going and then not use them on the back. There's plenty of other stuff between his notes and tattoos and regular imagery that it should work out well.

Thanks for all of the input so far, guys. I definitely appreciate it, and I've been trying everything out. I really wanted to have Teddy and the car on the front, but haven't been able to get Teddy to work at all, so he's gone for now. My next step is going to try to incorporate the tattoo facts and such.

[Paris]

I...............love it!!!! :clapping:

[HalfBreed]

Yeah, photos look gr8.....gotta say im not keen on the car for some reason

[chefazn]

looks great!

[Bunny Dojo]

Every little element of this composition drains so much time.
On to the back?




(in-case)

[JollyRoger]

Based purely on design, I have to chip in...

To me, the typography needs a little something. Now, please don't get me wrong, Tim - I know that you're a lover of retail design, so I'm not gonna go there!

But...

You have a (IMO) slightly too small TT or a too big actor's name. The font chosen for TT seems a little bit too edged. Perhaps go with one with more rounded serifs?

Your faded text could be more transparent, so it's still there, but not as prominent. ATM it's stealing a little too much from the (again IMO) not so well executed typography of Title and actor.
Could you please explain the various choices of fonts for the faded text? I've never seen this movie, so a little enlightement would do wonders for me.