Surrogates

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Post by mikezomaar »

I like the TT placed on the bottom. The 2 faces together look fine. Not convinced about the character behind bruce.
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Post by zantasha »

Great concept Bazz... how about making jagged edges of Bruce's skin so it gives a feel like some synthetic skin has been torn/peeled off a robot? and I think it will more realistic if the skin isn't cut half in straight line.
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Post by brunell »

I agree with zantasha. Also, how about increasing the title a bit. Seems a bit small and out of place at the moment. Other than that, great start!
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Post by sauron »

Very very good mate, but i agree with Zantasha... also like the tt how small it is at the moment.
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Post by bazzah »

Another update. Hows this looking?

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Post by Paris »

looks good
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Post by voetzoeker »

I like it, but the robot eye is a bit squint imo :)

Draw a cross on the face to matche up the eyes horizontally

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Post by bazzah »

Thanks Voet :) Any more suggestions, or is this done?
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Post by bpmford »

Baz....

I really like how this has come since it's start...

The front looks much better now and actually looks real!

My only problem is how dark the bar code is on the back.. It is faded but the faded looks odd and not suiting for the cover.

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Post by JollyRoger »

I think it looks like crap :sponge1:
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