Star Wars - The Phantom Menace

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Post by bazzah »

Looking good buddy. And a very unique template, which is always good :)
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JollyRoger wrote:QUOTE (JollyRoger @ Apr 12 2025, 07:13 PM) TTs, template stuff, and text colors (synopsis/quote and stuff) will be kept uniform on all 9 covers - to emphasize it's a collection within the collection.

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I love uniformity, and this template is awesome, so it goes without saying that this will be a great collection! Love this new one. :love:
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Love the template and colours you are using. Tiny things I have noted are the main left characters foot seems to be standing on the title and could the right hands characters face be slightly brighter to show the red colouration more. I agree with M0vieM0nsters view as well. Sorry not to use the characters names but I haven't watched these ones :no:
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Post by stampe »

goood start buddy :)
but i think you can find a much better quality darth maul for the front.
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Update...

- Adjusted characters front and back; levels/curves/brightness/Size/placement
- Brought the faces out on the front
- Added some more colors to the backgrounds
- Adjusted spaceships, added Qui-Gon's ship on the spine (no, it's not the same image as on the front Christian, just the same ship ;) )
- Fixed the Bonus Extras (bullets and sh!t), to make it legible what is what.

What style of TT do you prefer?
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Nice adjustments. Personally I prefer the second TT.
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I prefer the first TT :)
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Bazzah wrote:QUOTE (Bazzah @ Apr 13 2025, 01:26 PM) I prefer the first TT :)
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Nice Cover JR. :)

Maybe add some more contrast to young Anakin. I think he needs some more (+ a bit brighter and maybe less saturation) compared to Obi Wan.
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Thanks. I'll go w the majority (which was my own choice as well), and move on to the next movie.
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