Waterworld (1995)

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Thanks for the tips. I will try them :)
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Persuting JR tip about the main character should be more visible, i found an image of the "mariner".

So i'm testing the perpective, place and size.

I had to move the text a bit, so i haven't try yet a diferrent yellow or a shade, like JR said.

I plan to put 2 screen on the right.
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This looks a lot better. The other version was very cluttered on the back, imo. I like Costner on the jet ski :)
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It's great to see you returning to this one, Sxxo!

For the back, what if you were to put the "Disc Two" text on the left and "Disc Three" text stacked on the right, and put the Costner picture in the center?
Or, maybe you can move the entire waterline (including the front image) down a little bit, just to give yourself some extra room to space out the text?

For the front, maybe you can center "Kevin Costner" and split the tagline onto 3 lines? (Beyond the horizon // Lies the secret // To a new beginning)
Or, maybe try the tagline up top in your dark blue?
Your imagery creates a great sense of epic scale, but the text is kind of crowded and tight.
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Post by JollyRoger »

Maybe leave out the ´watch anywhere´banner and instead have the row of stills?
I would make Costner bigger.
Remember to have the movie name in yellow, in the credits block.

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Coming together nicely.
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Post by Fidi »

What they said, the image of Costner should be big er compared to.your scene in the front.

And I also agree it's a bit to much texts and maybe leave some on the back and add a few morgen images instead.

Keep it going, I think that's the right direction and I really like that built scenery in the front. :)
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That's a lot of great tips that i gona try :)

Thanks to all, for your time :cheers:
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