The Last of Us

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Your work is always worth continuing - Great start! :love:
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Looks really good so far but how about brightening it up a bit?

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Couple of things.

We need to see the TT entirely - at least be able to read 'us'.

The highlighting around the heads should be the same imo. Right now the white 'halo' around head #2 from the left is more pronounced than the others, which vary too much in intensity.
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