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Post by Sxxo »

Update with the tips from Fidi and Wyen.

--Cas i like the idea of the banner, i reworked it and make it smaller. Add two stills.
--Made some (simple) light effets to get more perspetive for the bachground.
--The SF area it's in progress. Just want to see how it goes

--As for the tips, from Fidi, see the notes i put in the image below (from is commentary).

Thanks for the input :)
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Post by Fidi »

Good update m8. :)

I'd add more haze / mist to the City. It's a giant city but Hera has nearly the same height so I think you need to make the distance more clear.
You also could reduce the city's opacity a bit.

And I didn't talk about the Barcode's background that takes away the attention, I meant the Banner under your scenery (green).

The woman in red needs the shadow on her right (compared to the exposure of the city - red).
Synopsis and both of the quotes should be aligned I think (blue).

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Post by Sxxo »

Made some progress.....start the front and made a few colour changes in legal area to match everything.
The image of Hera and Kim are small/lowres. That see if it's possible to continue this idea.
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Post by bazzah »

Looking good
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Post by sauron »

It looks good but I do still think the building in the back needs to be more hazey like Fidis example.
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Post by Sxxo »

Finally an update...
Not match the colours yet and rendering.
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Post by bazzah »

Very nice update!
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Post by sauron »

Looks good :)
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