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Bazzah wrote:QUOTE (Bazzah @ Jan 4 2021, 05:39 PM) What about moving them left a little, so the sword is in front of his shoulder? Or do Sauron's idea, and have the features there?
Will try both lol :razz:
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I prefer the one with the features :)
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Post by sauron »

I think the features looks good but how it is at the moment is a bit over powering.

I would make the box longer and have special features not broken up, change the font of each feature to the same as the synopsis so it isn’t condensed and personally I feel the synopsis would work better left aligned now.
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I'm not fond of the whole features layout using the head thingy and the symbol in the background, none of that works for me, sorry.
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Tempted to change the back image OR move the synopsis down slightly :Confused: :Confused: :Confused:
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I never like it when items like the flying W symbol get repeated like that.

IMHO, you should try and re-format the features to just use one flying W or else it would be better to use none.

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ctaulbee wrote:QUOTE (ctaulbee @ Jan 4 2021, 11:07 PM) I never like it when items like the flying W symbol get repeated like that.

IMHO, you should try and re-format the features to just use one flying W or else it would be better to use none.

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I did think that about the double W but as its Wonder Woman i thought id try it lol

Will take one off but im guessing itll look the same (minue 1 W) lol
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Hmmm tempted now :Confused:
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Try centralising the text, and maybe use the red from the synopsis somewhere in the features to break it up a little.
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