Wonder Woman 2017

[Speedz0r]

If you are going for the latest image of Diana I would lose the boxes. I would try and align the synopsis along with the image (make a path in the shape of the edge of the image and align the text from there to right). The two heads are certainly not working imo. One thing that could be done is remove the sword on the right and use more of the two characters there.

[Booche]

QUOTE (Speedz0r @ Jan 4 2021, 10:02 AM) If you are going for the latest image of Diana I would lose the boxes. I would try and align the synopsis along with the image (make a path in the shape of the edge of the image and align the text from there to right). The two heads are certainly not working imo. One thing that could be done is remove the sword on the right and use more of the two characters there.

Yeah now looking at it more i agree 110%, will carry on with this now ive got fresh eyes and hope it goes the way i want lol

[sauron]

You're definitely moving in the right direction with the latest updates though but I agree with what Speed has said.

[bazzah]

I agree, this is getting better. I also do not like the two heads there.

[Booche]

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Think i need a 3rd person on the bottom but limited on resources lol

[bazzah]

The synopsis looks better without the box. One of the things I do not like about the two heads though, is that they are in front of Wonder Woman. So it makes her look like a giant. Maybe it would look better if you shifted the two people across to the right, and had Wonder Woman's sword in front of them? Or replace the two heads with a scene of some sort.

[sauron]

That looks a lot better without the boxes now! Instead of having the two heads you could have the special features there instead? Maybe add them into a box could make a border with the thing she wears on her head if that makes sense? lol

[Booche]

QUOTE (Bazzah @ Jan 4 2021, 02:01 PM) The synopsis looks better without the box. One of the things I do not like about the two heads though, is that they are in front of Wonder Woman. So it makes her look like a giant. Maybe it would look better if you shifted the two people across to the right, and had Wonder Woman's sword in front of them? Or replace the two heads with a scene of some sort.

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[bazzah]

What about moving them left a little, so the sword is in front of his shoulder? Or do Sauron's idea, and have the features there?

[Booche]

QUOTE (sauron @ Jan 4 2021, 02:58 PM) That looks a lot better without the boxes now! Instead of having the two heads you could have the special features there instead? Maybe add them into a box could make a border with the thing she wears on her head if that makes sense? lol

Will try lol