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JollyRoger
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Post by JollyRoger »

Stunning!
A designer knows he has achieved perfection - not when there's nothing left to add - but when there's nothing left to take away

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Sxxo wrote:QUOTE (Sxxo @ Nov 15 2020, 05:19 PM) Great work, better than the movie itself.
You beat me to it. I was just about to type this word for word. If only the movie were half as good as this fabulous cover art. Looking great Matush!

And if I may, Matush. Not sure if you're done with the bottom portion on the back, but the FBI Warning and Walt Disney elements on the right side are crowding each other a bit I think. Might I suggest nudging just the FBI warning text down, so that the bottom of the text is level with the bottom of the "Blu-ray Disc" text below the Blu-ray logo on the far left side, then lowering the Walt Disney logo and text on the right side down until the top of the Walt Disney logo is level with the top of the LucasFilm logo on the far left side. Would look less crowded and give better balance. Before and after images provided below with the guides still showing.

Before:
https://www.lowpro.net/mymovies/covers/ ... before.jpg

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https://www.lowpro.net/mymovies/covers/ ... _after.jpg

Also, when looking really close at the larger preview image you provided I noticed a hard line running from left to right down at the very bottom. Not sure if that's intentional or not. Doesn't appear to be. In any event, just a couple tiny things I noticed I thought I'd mention. Again, fabulous job! Might be my favorite of the set you've done which is ironic considering it's my least favorite of the Star Wars films.
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Post by Matush »

Thanks for the insights, but I will leave legals as it is, in my other covers it is also in this arrangement and I do not see the need to change legals in every previous SW cover.

However, when it comes to the line you noticed, it is an element of the background and also on every bright SW cover it is visible.

I'm glad you like the cover Lowpro . :cheers:
venome wrote:QUOTE (venome @ Aug 21 2012, 12:20 AM) Mat this stunning work m8, wish it were mine :P
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Post by stampe »

Awesome work Mat :D
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Post by sauron »

Looks much better now :)
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Post by Speedz0r »

Another stunning masterpiece in my opinion :cheers:
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