The Lighthouse

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One of last year's best films, if not the best.

Besides the lighthouse itself and the two main characters, I've place the following relevant elements:
mermaid fin in the TT (not sure if it works, or more looks like a little plant)maritime rope as a divider for the actors' nameslightnings
I had the idea of adding some seagulls as well. At the same time I don't wanna make the front too packed.

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Looks good, great start :D
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I like the lighting effects, great design buddy. I also like the mermaid in the title, it is a nice touch
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Post by sauron »

Looking good :)

Maybe reduce the contrast a bit?
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Post by Fidi »

Interesting start my friend.

I wouldn't reduce the contrast, especially not on the characters, they're separated very well from the background the way it is now and it leads the eye away from the light in the middle to the two heads in my opinion. :)

I'd add some more rim light here and there but apart from that I've got nothing more to suggest.
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Added rim lights and started with the spine:

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Looking really good weyn :D
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Nice work on the lighting :)
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Post by Bunny Dojo »

You've done a great job capturing the movie! :cheers: I found this one an unpleasant watch but could appreciate the craftsmanship.

Maybe a tiny bit more contrast on the spine photos?
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Post by Sxxo »

Haven't seen this one, so i can't say mutch.
Even tho, it looks a sharp start.
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