JoJo Rabbit 4K

[TXron]

This is another cover that i was planning on completing after Doctor Sleep, but decided to make a new cover for the shining to match Doctor sleep so this has sat on the back burner until The shining was practically almost finished.

Wanted to try and capture the propaganda look, not sure about the TT right now

[bazzah]

Nice start How would the TT look moved up, and aligned with the top cream bar?

[TXron]

Better ? changed the TT and added paper texture

[TXron]

Changed the layout slightly how's this?

[bazzah]

What about torn paper for the bottom part under the title?

[TXron]

Better?

[bazzah]

I mean something more like this, for the paper texture

I really like the back layout too

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[TXron]

Thanks Bazzah, okay came up with this, i like your texture on the TT being faded in places may try to replicate that

[bazzah]

I think that works better

[sauron]

Looking good, maybe reduce the strength of the texture in the background, if you’re going for the propaganda look, a lot of posters during WW1 used simple backgrounds. You could try adding the texture over the whole cover to give an old look to it?

One thing about the back layout, I wouldn’t wrap the synopsis around the barcode, other than that looks good