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TXron wrote:QUOTE (TXron @ May 13 2020, 12:39 PM) No Problem, quick questions whats the billing block? :Confused:
The credits, aka "WARNER BROS presents ..."
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Ah okay :lsmile: Heres the update

*removed "billing block"
*lowered screen still
*made critic quote bigger and textured
*lowered synopsis so no wrap around barcode
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I like it :)
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Nice work :) But you should align the tag/barcode, synopsis and features together. And then space them apart evenly

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I agree with Bazzah. :smileyagree:

Proper alignment is easy to do, but also easy to overlook... it's a little thing that makes a big difference in the final result.

Poor alignment is like a musician that hits a sour note. :D :D :D
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Post by sauron »

I agree with Baz, I would also add some space between “scary and” and “mesmerising” as well as change “Years” to the same font as the rest of the synopsis.

Coming along nicely though.
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This is coming together nicely with all the great input from the people above. I am looking forward to see your front and back images matching up, colour/contrast and so on. Just ask if in doubt how, and you will receive the help you need from the Hires community.
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Thanks guys,i really appreciate the help, i always seem to struggle with back of my designs :Confused:

Update

*Layout aligned
*removed big "Y"
*spaced the critic
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Without going back through the thread which i won't be doing right now as off to bed soon but i think the space between the top of the quote and the synopsis should be the same? I also think that the quote would look better as before when it mimics the title as in the two lines are joined and maybe try a small increase in the spacing between lines on the synopsis? Similar to what you have on the special features? Couldn't help but look back now and yeah well give it a try and from what i can tell so far this is one amazing first cover! :)
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You could also try and darken certain area's to give it a bit more... poor example but it should give you the idea?

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