Doctor Sleep 2019 4K

[ctaulbee]

I'd follow Kernie's layout at the top and then extend the legal stuff across the bottom like normal, I can't see a reason to have it cramped up at the right like that myself, just makes for dead space on the left for no reason.

[TXron]

Okay, thanks guys. Right here's a new update based on everybody's feedback.

Update

*Coloured the still more orange and lighten a tad
*Reposition the credits center at the bottom
*changed the layout for both Special features and synopsis
*added critic review

[TXron]

Okay really didn't like the original synopsis, felt to short so got another one

[bazzah]

I really like it. Great job buddy!

[ctaulbee]

Looks good, probably could have left the Legal text smaller, it would have been less lines that way and the billing would have had room to come down and expand too.

[sauron]

This is looking a lot better now!

I’m not keen on the credits being right aligned, I feel they should be spanned the same width as the legals and the critic quote a bit bigger. Another thing the synopsis font looks fairly small, maybe reduce the amount of text and increase the point size.

Ignore the badly cloned example below but I’m thinking something like the below.

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[TXron]

Update for today,

*critic review format has changed and size
*new synopsis
*Special features and image bar moved higher to make room for larger credits
*Larger credits

[Kernie]

Here’s my quick two cents...

- This is coming along nicely!

- Don’t wrap the synopsis around the barcode. Start the synopsis beneath the barcode.

- If the critic quote doesn’t fit the space properly... perhaps look for another one that will?

- Remove the billing block entirely, this would allow you to shift everything above it down and provide more room for those elements to breathe. It’s starting to feel very cluttered, particularly in the top half.

[TXron]

QUOTE (Kernie @ May 13 2020, 11:26 AM) Here’s my quick two cents...

- This is coming along nicely!

- Don’t wrap the synopsis around the barcode. Start the synopsis beneath the barcode.

- If the critic quote doesn’t fit the space properly... perhaps look for another one that will?

- Remove the billing block entirely, this would allow you to shift everything above it down and provide more room for those elements to breathe. It’s starting to feel very cluttered, particularly in the top half.

No Problem, quick questions whats the billing block?

[Kernie]

The credits are called a “billing block.”