Doctor Sleep 2019 4K

[sauron]

This is looking good.

How about removing the stroke from the barcode and adding the same texture on the TT on the front to the white of the barcode and the spine title?

I would move “Special Features” to the right so it aligns with the credits and other info, also instead of having special features in italics why not have the same weight as the TT and not italics?

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[TXron]

QUOTE (sauron @ May 10 2020, 10:45 PM) This is looking good.

How about removing the stroke from the barcode and adding the same texture on the TT on the front to the white of the barcode and the spine title?

I would move “Special Features” to the right so it aligns with the credits and other info, also instead of having special features in italics why not have the same weight as the TT and not italics?

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Thanks Sauron took your advice heres the preview

Update as highlighted in green

Moved the special features to the right to alian with credits. No more italic and changed to match TT in bold with texture

Spine texture added to TT and on Ultra HD logo

recoloured and lightened the stills

removed the stroke on barcode

[TXron]

Coming along nicely guys, don't think i would ever have gotten it to this level without you guys, so massive thanks. I'm just wondering about these empty spaces, do they need filling?

[bazzah]

This has shaped up really nicely indeed I am not too bothered about the empty spaces, but you could always add some of the darker orange/red grunge to the top space.

I would also work on those stills a little more. They are still very dark, and the guy on the right has a green tinge to him

[TXron]

Scrapped the middle image and re adjusted the colours

[bazzah]

I would lighten them even more, and add an more orange to them

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[zorbic]

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[Kernie]

Maybe it's my undiagnosed OCD, but I think the biggest issue I see is that your alignment is all over the place.

Try turning everything on the right side of the back cover into a "column" and set a left and right guidelines to align all of your text boxes and elements, including the barcode and technical specs/logos.

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I didn't include it in my example, but another idea would be to extend the paint/blood swash that contains the stills a little bit further to the right guideline to eliminate some negative space.

[sauron]

Great suggestion by Kernie, it’s kind of what I was getting at with my previous post regarding lining up to the credits and the one before that about having it in “containers” to bring some structure to the back work.

[M0vieM0nster]

Maybe uncheck the hyphonate on the synopsis text too? Oh no sorry that was Andy's mock up Great design so far!