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Post by **bazzah** » Tue Sep 03, 2019 12:31 pm

Works for me

Post by **sauron** » Tue Sep 03, 2019 6:59 pm

Looks good, how bout moving the robot guy (top right) to the right a little so it sort of matches the other half?

Post by **Fidi** » Wed Sep 04, 2019 5:58 am

Mat, that's awesome work! I've got your PSDs so I knwo what you put into that front artworks and that makes it even more impressive to me.

I agree with sauron and would move the robot guy just a tad as well.
On D. Luna I'd some curves to match his contrast and lights with the other characters (compare to F. Jones for example).
Maybe try to move F. Whitaker behind J. Wen so you get rid of that black shoulder.

I know you've made the Tie Fighters in the background more bright to show they're far away (on the left of F. Jones). But I think they get lost and it's very hard to even see them there so maybe find a compromise between distance and visibility?

Post by **Matush** » Sat Sep 07, 2019 6:38 am

sauron , fidi Thanks guys, I try your suggestions but in the next week when i get back from holidays

Post by **Matush** » Mon Sep 16, 2019 9:04 am

So my holidays are over and it's time to get back to the project.

For the current layout I tried to leave Cassian kneeling, he doesn't really suit me there.
K2S0 robot slightly shifted to the right, current Cassian improved contrast and curves. More visible Tie fighters at F. Jones.
How do you like it now?

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Post by **bazzah** » Mon Sep 16, 2019 11:50 am

I personally prefer it without kneeling guy. His stance did look a little awkward to me. The x-wing looks good over there.

shepard1378 · Post by **shepard1378** » Mon Sep 16, 2019 2:34 pm

Looks Fabulous, how soon till we see the back?

Post by **Fidi** » Mon Sep 16, 2019 3:43 pm

I think it is very good as it is now. No more suggestions at the moment.

shepard1378 wrote:QUOTE (shepard1378 @ Sep 16 2019, 04:34 PM) Looks Fabulous, how soon till we see the back?

Maybe when it's done.

Post by **sauron** » Mon Sep 16, 2019 6:49 pm

Looks good to me as well, looks better without the kneeling guy.

Post by **Matush** » Wed Sep 25, 2019 8:13 pm

Thanks guys.

another update. Try to create back, maybe something like this way...
I need to improve curves, saturation etc. and add more action.

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