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Hello everyone. Just watched Peppermint so I thought I would make a dvd cover for it. I would love to hear your thoughts on the front I have so far. Thanks
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Really nice start! How would it look swapping the guy and the two behind him over?
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Swapped the guy and the two. Added a little smoke around the fire. I am thinking about adding some more debris on either side at the bottom?
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The guy you moved, his skin tones are very different from the rest of the characters, you should adjust him, also the title is getting lost in the background needs more contrast.

I don't know about everyone else but the two color tagline is very distracting for me.
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ctaulbee wrote:
QUOTE (ctaulbee @ Jan 26 2019, 08:04 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
The guy you moved, his skin tones are very different from the rest of the characters, you should adjust him, also the title is getting lost in the background needs more contrast.

I don't know about everyone else but the two color tagline is very distracting for me.


Thanks CT. I agree with you on the tagline. I will work on it a bit.
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ctaulbee wrote:
QUOTE (ctaulbee @ Jan 26 2019, 02:04 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
The guy you moved, his skin tones are very different from the rest of the characters, you should adjust him, also the title is getting lost in the background needs more contrast.

I don't know about everyone else but the two color tagline is very distracting for me.



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Bazzah wrote:
QUOTE (Bazzah @ Jan 26 2019, 03:38 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
ctaulbee wrote:
QUOTE (ctaulbee @ Jan 26 2019, 08:04 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

The guy you moved, his skin tones are very different from the rest of the characters, you should adjust him, also the title is getting lost in the background needs more contrast.

I don't know about everyone else but the two color tagline is very distracting for me.


:iamwithstupid:


You guys crack me up! :giggle:

Ok I adjusted the guys skintone, changed the two color tagline, changed the background, added a little more fire/debris and a gradiant under the title to make it stand out more.

I'm not sure if I like the tagline at all maybe it should be removed. What do you all think?
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redt8tr wrote:
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I'm not sure if I like the tagline at all maybe it should be removed. What do you all think?


I'm actually not fond of it there either, you might find a place for it on the back later.
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ctaulbee wrote:
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I'm actually not fond of it there either, you might find a place for it on the back later.


:iamwithstupid: again

I think the problem is, it gets too mixed up with the actors name that is in the same style and positioning. If you do want to keep it on the front, you could shift the title up and place it underneath?
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Great work so far and I especially like the image you chose of Jennifer. Not sure about the picture of the dad as it is a different angle than the rest, also not sure what's available, personally I haven't seen much resources for this title, sadly. I would make the TT red so it goes with the wings in the back and actor name. I would also remove the tagline on the front, unless you can fit it on the bottom somehow. Looking forward to see your update. Oh and one last thing, the cutouts are a bit hard on the edges, maybe give them a slight feather to round the edges a little.
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