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This was supposed to be a HRC comp entry but got tired oft it and also not enough time :(
But may as well give it another go, still some stuff to do on the front, maby change the title, not sure if i like it
What you pros think?

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Edit: noticed there are some small similitaries with Tims front layout, it was not intentional an d i'm to lazy to start something new so hope it's okay anyway? :)
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It's a real shame you didn't have the time or inclination to get this finished for the competition. It looks great!
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Post by M0vieM0nster »

I really like it, it's a shame you didn't get it done for the HRC as Baz said but don't give up on it. I look forward to seeing where this goes Sam
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Some more work done :) still have to cut out some stuff properly and fix some small things.

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Man, that is sexy af! :yes:
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Looking great! Maybe adjust the curves on Charlize on the back?
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:yes:

'Adjust her curves'!!! :giggle:
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JollyRoger wrote:QUOTE (JollyRoger @ Oct 26 2018, 06:02 PM) :yes:

'Adjust her curves'!!! :giggle:
Grow up! :lsmile:
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Post by Speedz0r »

Nice work samppa! I got a few suggestions tho. What about moving the TT and actor name higher up to free more space for Charlize head on the front? Not sure if it's the coloring of the face of the guy or if it's just the very weird angle he's at but something doesn't look right (not sure what kind of resources that is available of him and the car). Seems to be a lot of empty space on the back tho, I reckon you could make the image of Charlize on the back a little bigger and move her up a bit. Maybe also make the bonus features bigger, or move them up and add screens underneath them? The synopsis could also use some work.
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Thanks for the suggestions guys, I'll take all in consideration and se what I can do :)
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