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Ok, here's the front w Actor's names at the top (does it look cluttered?) and added embers and sparks.

@Matush - I've repositioned the burst/streaks overlay. Centre is now to the right of Cavill's head and in the negative space between Affleck's arm and body. Hope it's better.

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Have you tried reducing the actor names? The sparks definitely add a spark to your cover :D
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Bazzah wrote:QUOTE (Bazzah @ Mar 31 2018, 12:37 PM) The sparks definitely add a spark to your cover :D
Too much? I can delete some
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I think it looks good, but curious to see what the sparks look like if you change the layer to linear dodge (add) or screen. They seem to be more on top of the cover instead of inside the scene (if you get what I'm saying) atm.
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Bazzah wrote:QUOTE (Bazzah @ Mar 31 2018, 12:37 PM) Have you tried reducing the actor names?
Did you mean sizewise, or simply leave out Ms. Gadot?
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JollyRoger wrote:QUOTE (JollyRoger @ Mar 31 2018, 01:40 PM) Too much? I can delete some
No I don't think too much. Maybe lower the opacity a little, or try what Speed suggested.
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Basic back layout... or something.

Still very crude with lots of finetuning to do.

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Thinking portraits to the left of the top scene, stills in the bottom row.

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Front is done, I think
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It's always great to see you doing a new cover Jakob!

I think the front is done. The only thing I don't like that much is the bottom ultimate edition line. I'd change it with a tagline or a critic quote, but it's up to what you prefer.

The back layout is great, but atm the synopsis is too close to the barcode. Can you try and post the back without the left frames?

PS: you need to send me that beamlight file/brush that you are using behind the actors.
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JollyRoger wrote:QUOTE (JollyRoger @ Mar 31 2018, 01:15 PM) Ok, here's the front w Actor's names at the top (does it look cluttered?) and added embers and sparks.

@Matush - I've repositioned the burst/streaks overlay. Centre is now to the right of Cavill's head and in the negative space between Affleck's arm and body. Hope it's better.

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