Death Wish 2018

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Post by sauron »

I like the addition of the background but not keen on how it just cuts off on the back... I do also still think the synopsis is too large.

As Fidi suggested above the gun doesn't have much detail in it and would be better if it wasn't a black shape.
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I agree with both sauron and Fidi. Also,the city image seems to have too many colors for me atm, maybe change it to something like the blue grunge you have on the top of the front? You could try and play with "shadows/highlights" to try and bring more detail back into the image of Bruce on the front.
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Post by M0vieM0nster »

Maybe try desaturating the new background and losing some opacity so it's there but more subtle?
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The paint splatter isn't working for me. Doesn't fit with this type of movie..
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Post by sauron »

Hmmm I'm not sure about the black - why not just use another picture of the same scenery in the background and then adjust Bruce to match the scene?
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Post by Speedz0r »

I think it looks okay as it is, but the H on the spine is really hard to read and I would put the Bruce layer above the tagline so it doesn't cut off his head. Also, try to match the Bruce on the back with the one on the front (colors, brightness/contrast etc). I wounder how the legals and credits will look tho, since most of your text is white and the background is white on the bottom, fading to black. So can't really tell how good the background image is working atm.
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