Death Wish 2018

[kruifdesign]

New design

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[kruifdesign]

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[VincentLupo]

I like the red title.

[Speedz0r]

Yeah, I think the latest one looks better too

[bazzah]

Yeah, red for me. Nice start buddy

[sauron]

Yeah the red looks good

I would suggest adjusting the kerning on the title a bit, the A and T have a gap between them and the D and E as well, make these tighter and it will look better

[kruifdesign]

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[sauron]

Looks good but the synopsis is very large, this could be made smaller so you can add some quotes ?

[Fidi]

I'd remove that flare arround Willis and mybe try to add the flare's color to the background instead of the white color.
Then maybe reduce the levels on Willis (if the image quality makes that possible) because there are many details getting lost I think (gun for example, it's only a black chuck at the moment )

And whoat sauron said about the synopsis. I'd as well reduce the text a bit and add some quotes, ratings or even some more artwork instead.

[kruifdesign]

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