The amazing spider-man

[Speedz0r]

I think the original title looks best

[bazzah]

I like the original title too. This looks great And good job on the English version, but you will need to flip the title around 180 degrees

[Cyrmor]

Ok I will return the title on the slice. For texts is understandable or not?

[Cyrmor]

For the label I have no idea yet that it fits with the jacket.

[Cyrmor]

The English is OK, but you may want to consider using this synopsis:

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Abandoned by his parents and raised by an aunt and uncle, teenager Peter Parker (Andrew Garfield), AKA Spider-Man, is trying to sort out who he is and exactly what his feelings are for his first crush, Gwen Stacy (Emma Stone). When Peter finds a mysterious briefcase that was his father's, he pursues a quest to solve his parents' disappearance. His search takes him to Oscorp and the lab of Dr. Curt Connors (Rhys Ifans), setting him on a collision course with Connors' alter ego, the Lizard.[/quote]

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Teenage social outcast Peter (Andrew Garfield) spends his days trying to unravel the mystery of his own past and win the heart of his high school crush, Gwen Stacy (Emma Stone). A mysterious briefcase belonging to his father, who abandoned him when he was a child, leads Peter to his dad's former partner, Dr. Connors. The discovery of his father's secret will ultimately shape his destiny of becoming "Spider-Man" and bring him face to face with Connors' villainous alter ego, the Lizard.[/quote]

Last edited by bazzah on Thu Dec 07, 2017 1:21 pm, edited 1 time in total.

[Cyrmor]

Here are the 2 versions.

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[bazzah]

Really good work buddy!

[Cyrmor]

Thanks

[sauron]

Good job on this

[Cyrmor]

Thank you for your advice.