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Hello everyone, that's what I'm working on. I'm interested in any advice.

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Looking good. Maybe you could lighten the red up on spideys head though? It looks a little dull on the front
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Post by sauron »

Looks good but I feel the title gets a little lost and I agree with Baz about spidey :)
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Small update

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This is the progress of my work.

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Looking good, but it may be too much red on the front?
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Post by sauron »

I agree with Baz it does look like a bit too much red, plus I liked the names on the front - are you going to add them back in?
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It must be better

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Post by bazzah »

Yes, it looks better with colour :)
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Post by Speedz0r »

I think it looks better, but too many different colors on the front imo. Not sure if this is any better, but red didn't work that well and blue blends too much in with the main image, but I thought I'd just show you how it would look with the rest of the images B&W.
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In order for it to work, I do think you need a couple more black/grey spots on the back.
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