Kong - Skull Island

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Post by weyn »

I don't like these gradients you put all over the texts and logos. I would get rid if them except the review quote and the Special Features title. As for the quote, since it's a two-liner, I'd make the effect one on each line. Hope you get what I mean :)

And move the quote a bit to the left towards the border of the main image.
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weyn wrote:
QUOTE (weyn @ Jun 5 2017, 01:26 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I don't like these gradients you put all over the texts and logos.


But I do. ;)

Changed the rest of your suggestions. :)

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I think it looks epic :)
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Looks great buddy, I'm not overly fond of using two weights on the synopsis text but other than that it's all good :D
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Post by sauron »

Have you tried the quote font the same colour as the background...

This colour

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Yes, I've tried that. But I think that's to many different colours for the texts and after I've moved the quote to the left of the artwork (where the background is brighter) I don't see a problem anymore with the dark quote. ;)

Changed the synopsis so evertything is in the same weight now. Better?

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Yup looks good buddy, the quote looks OK to me in either color, so whatever you think works for me :D
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Post by bazzah »

I think the synopsis looks better as one weight. If you had a tagline as the start of the synopsis, it would work with a heavier weight, but as it is all the synopsis it should be kept the same :)

What about changing the synopsis background colour to the same as the stills background colour?
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Just duplicated the SF's background quickly, it's not oonly a different colour. ;)

I'm not sure but somehow I think it looks better optically isolated from each other?

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Fidi wrote:
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I'm not sure but somehow I think it looks better optically isolated from each other?


I think so too :D
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