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Post by Speedz0r »

Looks really good. Now show us the whole cover :)
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Thx! I still have to do the spine, will show the complete cover when I'm done with it. ;)
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Added a "The" to the title on the front & spine.
And I've moved the quote on the back a bit. It's just a try, don't know if it's all balanced better like this. Or back to where it was?

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Stunning!! I am not sure if the quote needs to be over to the left a little, but it doesn't matter. The whole cover is pretty much perfect!
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Post by sauron »

I personally think the quote looks better where it was before. The only other thing I can suggest is to move Keanu down on the back so his head isn't right at the top, may have to reduce the size of him?
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Like this? His hair are completely visable now and it's a small gap between him and the top edge now.
I hope it's clearly visable in the small preview. ;)

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I think he needs to be moved up more, maybe even a little more then he was before. Not sure about the quote, maybe you can break it into two lines instead of four? It's not a big deal tho and the cover looks superb as it is.
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Yup, that's what I thought about Keanu as well. ;)

The problem with the quote is, it would be very small letters if I reduce the size to only two lines.
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I don't think it matters too much about the quote and Keanu. As Speed says, it looks amazing either way. Do whatever you like best :D
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Fidi wrote:
QUOTE (Fidi @ Feb 24 2017, 08:54 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Yup, that's what I thought about Keanu as well. ;)

The problem with the quote is, it would be very small letters if I reduce the size to only two lines.

Oh yeah, I should have explained. I was thinking if you had it above the guns in the top left corner. Then it could be two lines.
But yeah, doesn't mean anything. Still awesome either way ;)
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