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Zungam wrote:
QUOTE (Zungam @ Feb 16 2017, 06:17 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Please keep details like that in PM's guys :whistle:

I really like what you've got here, bud!


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Fidi, I think Trinity looks good enough quality wise buddy :)
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I don't think it's much better, but you can check it out in the gallery: Trinity
I'm really looking forward to see what you do on the back.
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Post by sauron »

Looking good! The smaller text (the code that drops from top to bottom) looks better now as well.
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Started with the back.

I know it's much text but there are so many specials. :shrug:
And thanks to CT for another synopsis!

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Wow! fooking awesome!
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Dayum, this looks great! Can you do me one favour though? Can you move Fishburne at the top slightly over to the left so he is central? :p

And maybe add a slight blur tinge behind the lightning ball?
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Also, (and this is being really anal, you can thank Kernie for teaching me) can you arrange the synopsis a bit better, so it doesn't have so much negative space at the end of the first and last paragraphs? :razz:

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Arkflip wrote:
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Wow! fooking awesome!


Best way to say it :cool: and your welcome.
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Post by Fidi »

Thanks guys!

@ Baz: No problem, at least the first post. ;)
Moved Morpheu a bit so he's exactly in the middle now. Don't know why I didn't notice that by myself. :whistle:
Also I've added some blur to the lighting ball.

Synopsis is a bit more difficult. I don't want to increase the size of the letters. But my english is not good enough to add some more words (which make sence of course) to the synopsis of part 1 & 3. So maybe someone can help me with hte text?

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Post by bazzah »

The synopsis isn't a big thing :p Just trying to help you perfect your cover! You could increase the kerning so more of the fourth line is filled?
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