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Hey! Time for a new WIP. :)

I know, another collection. But I need that cover and it's something, I wanted to do for a long time now.
I was inspired by a great custom artwork I found on google.

Not finished yet of course but I wanted to show where I am now and hear you suggestions.

Agent Smith on the spine isn't done. Will make it similar to Neo and then add some bullets above the title.
The two women standing on the gate of Zion are a bit lost I think so should I remove them?
Also I'm not sure if I need the names of the actors?

I'm trying to add one of these robots (which are defending Zion) infront of the title. I've only bad images so I see what I can do.
Then I'm not really happy with the image of Trinity, it's very poor quality. Haven't found one in a fitting pose yet so maybe I have to build one by myself.

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I think it looks brilliant as it is! A little work on Trinity on the front should have her looking perfect :)
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I think it's looking great already too :D
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Post by sauron »

Looking good :) I would make the tagline all caps and maybe smaller with some tracking (spacing between each letter).
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Look cool buddy ! Like the whole montage !

What about adding a subtile green color ?

Also im not fan of the font you used for the quotes
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Thanks for your answers guys!
The font is a normal Helvetia but I don't know what happened in the preview, it looks like squeezed. Any suggestions for a different font?

I hopefully will post an update this evening. :)
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Update:

- Changed the colour sheme a bit. This wasn't what I had in mind in the beginning, but I really like it that way. Don't know if that was what shoty had in mind. ^^
- Added a Zion APU and a pilot infront of the title
- Added hair to the two big heads
- Reworked the gate on the left so it's more detailed now
- corrected many little mistakes on all the heads, added grain, new lighting etc.

Will somehow add some reflections to all the glasses when I get it how to do that and I've done nothing about hte texts yet.
And I think I'll change the image of Trinity.

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Post by bazzah »

Looks even better buddy :thumb:
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Look really good m8 ! What about a condensed font ?
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Thank you both for taking the time to comment!

Small update with new font & tagline and reflections on all the glasses. Should I keep the names on top?

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