This is better, personally I'm not too keen on the green names as I feel it take the focus away from the whole synopsis. You also have a few spelling errors, I have rewritten it for you below
The Turtles continue to live in the shadows as no one knows they were the ones who took down Shredder. After super villain Shredder escapes custody, The Turtles now need to take him down again with help from their friends April O'Neil (Megan Fox), Vern Fenwick (Will Arnett) and the masked vigilante Casey Jones (Stephen Amell). Shredder joins forces with mad scientist Baxter Stockman (Tyler Perry) and the two henchmen, Bebop (Gary Anthony Williams) and Rocksteady (Stephen "Sheamus" Farrelly), to unleash a diabolical plan to take over the world. As the Turtles prepare to take on Shredder and his new crew, they find themselves facing an even greater evil with similar intentions: the notorious Krang.
This is better, personally I'm not too keen on the green names as I feel it take the focus away from the whole synopsis. You also have a few spelling errors, I have rewritten it for you below
The Turtles continue to live in the shadows as no one knows they were the ones who took down Shredder. After super villain Shredder escapes custody, The Turtles now need to take him down again with help from their friends April O'Neil (Megan Fox), Vern Fenwick (Will Arnett) and the masked vigilante Casey Jones (Stephen Amell). Shredder joins forces with mad scientist Baxter Stockman (Tyler Perry) and the two henchmen, Bebop (Gary Anthony Williams) and Rocksteady (Stephen "Sheamus" Farrelly), to unleash a diabolical plan to take over the world. As the Turtles prepare to take on Shredder and his new crew, they find themselves facing an even greater evil with similar intentions: the notorious Krang.
Wow, that is too kind bro Big thank you!
edit: Got rid of the green and kept all the text white. Replaced my synopsis with the typo-free one that sauron did. Is it done guys? [attachment=34628:Untitled_1.jpg] [attachment=34629:Teenage_...evisited.jpg]
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