Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles Out of the Shadows (revisited)

Post by **ctaulbee** » Sat Sep 10, 2016 1:06 pm

Still seems dark to me, do you have a stroke or glow on it? as it looks like it does to me, if so you really ought to remove that IMHO

Post by **Speedz0r** » Sat Sep 10, 2016 1:34 pm

Yeah, I had both drop shadow and stroke on it. Left side is with drop shadow and right side is without drop shadow.
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Post by **ctaulbee** » Sat Sep 10, 2016 3:59 pm

Right is much better

Post by **Speedz0r** » Sat Sep 10, 2016 5:01 pm

Aight

Post by **ctaulbee** » Sat Sep 10, 2016 6:43 pm

Might take a look at the synopsis formatting now, you have a narrow column with a lot of tiny text in it and due to the justification it's creating "rivers" or runs down thru the whole paragraph a couple nearly run top to bottom but there is a lot of wide space words on there, take a look here:

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I created some text on the same scale and justified as well, notice it does not have rivers,.

Reason is I adjusted the "tracking" or the space between letters a bit and the pt size down just a bit from where you are, there is really no hard set rule on this that works every time as fonts vary in many ways.

Therefore you just have to "tweak" the text settings until you get what you want, I've had to switch font weights before ( heavier/lighter) or in a few cases just rewrite some of the text in order to deal with like large words that were causing problems but generally by moving the font pt size up and down in tiny increments and moving the tracking as well will yield a combo that works.

Post by **Speedz0r** » Sat Sep 10, 2016 7:39 pm

Good point buddy. Is this any better or should I try and change the font/synopsis?
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Post by **ctaulbee** » Sat Sep 10, 2016 8:22 pm

That looks fine to me

Post by **Speedz0r** » Sat Sep 10, 2016 11:19 pm

Nice

Post by **sauron** » Sun Sep 11, 2016 12:18 am

Looks a lot better now but I feel the orphaned text looks weird, maybe increase the font size a bit so that "Jones (Stephen Amell)." isn't on it's own and maybe right align it?

Post by **Speedz0r** » Sun Sep 11, 2016 10:53 am

I changed out the synopsis. Can this work?
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The only word that's being spaced up (not sure what you call it in english) is alongside.

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