Have you tried adding some fog in the foreground, to add depth to the scene, and also show us the mist creeping up on everyone?
I'm chiming in about the TT. Somehow the hand interferes with the title, in my opinion. Does it say 'The Mast', 'The Most', or 'The Mist'? To avoid this dilemma, you could try adding the hand as the dot over the 'i' - or alternatively add a bloody dot about 'i' to emphasize that it is, in fact an 'i', not an a,o,u or... Just a thought.



