Breathe(Respire)

[alienmem]

Ok. Guys. I kept it simple. No fancy stuff. It's still unfinished. Still want to do a light beam through between the girls as Speed suggested, but overall this is it.

Whaddya say?


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[Speedz0r]

Think it looks pretty good. I know that the black line on the front poster is supposed to not be straight according to the template, but i think a straight line would look better, possibly in the same color as the line on the back, or the purple on the back.
PS: I believe these are the brushes that i used: http://spiritsighs-stock.deviantart.com/ar...t-Rays-27143616
I only used the straight one which is size "1209".

[alienmem]

Good idea. I was going to put a horizontal beige bar also on the top back between the quote in purple and the image of the girls..Will try it out. Thanks for the light ray brushes. I still haven't read any tutorials about that. Didn't even know you used brushes for that. Well , there are always several way to achieve certain effects. Dunno if this is one of them.


Maybe add some horizontal black bars on the bottom back would make it look more organized...dunno. Will try out.

[Speedz0r]

I would rearrange the legals. I would do these changes here, but also the "to order replacements" text should be on the bottom, imo.
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[alienmem]

don't you think it feels a little empty that way? between the synopsis and the french flag

[Speedz0r]

Yeah, but I couldn't organize it the way i wanted (too much work when i don't have the layers). You could make the credits a little bigger? If you could find some screencaps from the movie then you could add them to the back. I just think it looks very unorganized the way it is atm. Maybe you can organize it the same way as the template?
Here's a quick example.
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[alienmem]

Ok. Will try that. Looks like a better placement indeed

[sauron]

I still feel the image on the back takes up way too much room, if you cut some of the bottom off this would free up some space and then allow you to have some stills as well as re-arrange the back.

[alienmem]

What about now guys? I was tinkering with the idea you guys had of the stills but even if I cut the back image up to the blonde girls tits I don't think there would be much room..maybe a little strip? Think it's worth a shot?


Here's where i'm at..already with the light rays(thanks once again Speed for the brushes)



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[Speedz0r]

No problem buddy, good job! I think it looks great now. Yeah, if you gonna have some stills there, then i would have done something like this:
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I think it might make the cover look a little more complete, but it's not necessary if you don't want it.