The Flash S01

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Post by ctaulbee »

You have done a great job on this Cirus, I do like sauron's suggestion on color :)
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Post by Arkflip »

Great update! The coloring is great!

Only thing i can suggest is to remove the barcode black stroke and maybe reduce a bit the quote shadow.
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Thanks for the advice guys. :)
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Post by Cirus »

So what do you think? Any suggestions? I think there are too many white text on the first version, so I made another one with a little yellow.

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I think you have done another excellent job! I like the white text version myself :)
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Post by Zungam »

I'm leaning towards the second version I think. Both works though :)

The synopsis looks a little "heavy" imo. What's the current font size? What about reducing the text size by 0,5 and increase the spacing so the text would fill the same area?
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Amazing work! :cool:
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Post by Paris »

Maybe make each still on the back have the same blue tone as the bottom right one (while still keeping other colors for contrast like yellow, red, green, etc,)? I think that would make a stronger connection with the front and back color scheme.
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Post by Cirus »

Better?

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Post by sauron »

That looks better to me! I think the yellow text version works best :)
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