The Hunger Games

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Post by sauron »

The characters front and back seem a bit too red to me.
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How is this?

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Post by sauron »

Still seems a bit too red to me... I would make some adjustments if I were you to make it something like this...
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Done?

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Post by Fidi »

I'd work on the screens a bit more. You have similar colours all over your cover but the screens stand out very much because of the many different colours.

You could keep the skin tones as they are and only work on the backgrounds of the images to make them more similar to each other. :)
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Post by sauron »

Looking better now although a bit yellow but I'm not gonna nag anymore as you're probably getting fed up with me haha

I have to agree with Fidi about the stills though.
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Post by bazzah »

I have reworked the stills and colour slightly.

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Post by sauron »

Stills look much better now :)
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Thanks :)
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Post by venome »

Way better m8 ;)
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