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For my next project, I have decided to make a set for Hunger Games. What do you think of the front?

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Looks good. How it works the title on the botton. Now i find it could not so good read.
Can you make the persons a little bit larger?
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Nice start here Bazz! Like the idea with the flaggs, that's cool!

I agree about the title, but I wouldn't move him down. You could just brighten him up a bit on the left and right.
Larger characters would be wrong in my opinion when you compare them to the viewers and the flagpoles. :)

And I'm not sure about the colour scheme. I mean the purple, not sure if this really works here.
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i wouldnt put LIAM HEMSWORTH as a Name on the front... Josh Hutcherson would be better cause he's on the front with Jennifer Lawrence ;)
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Post by sauron »

Good start so far but it's a bit too red at the moment, also I would move the TT down a bit.
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Post by M0vieM0nster »

Very nice start Baz, i agree about Liam Hemsworth and moving the TT down a wee bit ;)
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Post by Speedz0r »

I agree with the rest, but also, what about making the text on the bottom a little larger as well. It looks to be a bit too small atm, imo.
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Like the other guys said, great start buddy ! :)
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Post by bazzah »

Thanks for all the replies. Is this better?

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Nice update old woman!
I'd say the colours are much better now. How would it look if you move the title down to the middle of the logo?
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