The Maze Runner

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Post by xshoty »

Looking very good m8 ! :D i plan to do a cover for this title too ! :)
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Update.

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Your update looks very good. Also the details of the plants is really impressive. I like it. :D
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What does it look like with the original line up you had, I only ask as the positioning of the characters seem more symmetrical than they do in your last update,

also, sorry but it looks like Ki Hong Lee's head is on fire, and I'm not keen on updated TT I think it looks better without the moss :D
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I agree with Darksaber in all points. The first line up was more harmonic.
Now you have two legs between the girl on the right and the big guy in the middle. Where they belong to?

And I personally don't like this lianes coming into the tagline from the right & left. The tagline is no element of the artwork of walls and rocks so for me it makes no sense they're hanging on there...
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Post by venome »

It is very well done Pyt, but you can use the vine elements on back for something cool. It's ultimately your choice whether the vines stay or not.
A character rearrangement will even things out too :)
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Post by pytlaczek »

It's called killing creativity... :notsure:
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Is this how the front should look?

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Post by Fidi »

I prefer the newest update.
But hey bud, it's your cover! When you like to move on with the version before don't care about what I say. :)
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Post by deimos »

Great Pyt, I also like this update, it's better. But i think U Can add these little roots on the TT and tagline
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Post by Darksaber »

We're not trying to kill your creativity, but your original layout is more aesthetically pleasing, and I believe you was on the right track to begin with :)

Your new update looks much better, I'm still not sure about the fire though, but in the end it's your decision :D
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