Teen Wolf Season 1

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killer999pt
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Post by killer999pt »

Hello guys,

It's been a while since i done any cover. Almost 2 years i think.

So help me out, what do you think ?

Thanks a lot,

With best regards

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Post by Fidi »

Good start, I like your image on the front. :)

I've some suggestions if you like.
I think the flare on the front is to much. I'd try to blend out the two line a bit. At the moment it looks not to realistic for me. But apart from that the light effects on your front are really cool.

I personally think the title only in white without anything special is a bit boring for that kind of movie. Maybe you can work with a subtle texture here.
And you could move the title on the spine down a bit so he begins under the guy's shoulder.

The background on top of the back could need some color balance. Atm the color turns from blue (on the right) into green (on the left). Since blue is your main color I'd try to turn the green on this image into blue as well. And all the character could be lighten up a bit I guess.

On screens I personally prefer matched colors (skin tones, background colors etc.). I think you could try, this might look good on this sinde the rest is dominated by blue. And you should have an eye on contrast anf levels here. ;)

Last but not least I'd change the color of the legal area from white into a brighter grey. Then this area won't stand out as much as atm.
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Post by ctaulbee »

Nice start bud :)

I agree with Fidi's suggestions, in addition might take a look at the synopsis, seems a little long perhaps it could be shortened some also it's hard to read on the right side and would be better if you matched the skew of the text to the background instead of rotating it.

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Post by venome »

Nice work here.. agree with all the points mentioned :)
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Post by killer999pt »

Thanks a lot for comments and the support my friends.

As soon as I have time I will use your suggestions

About the synopsis, i only find a 3 or 4 very small and not referred some of the most important characters.

My English is a little bite rusty rigth now, but i will try to cut text from the synopsis.

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