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JollyRoger wrote:
QUOTE (JollyRoger @ Aug 5 2014, 02:34 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I'm the odd man out, it seems. I think the synopsis text is hard to read slanted like that, but I can't figure out how to place it instead. :shrug:

PS - colors look smashing! :thumb:


Angle your head to right postition and read JR :D Or print It out when I´m done then read the case at the right position. :)

Thanks Zungam, venome and JR for feedback! :)
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Added SF box

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Nice!

Can you adjusted the synopsis so every line start from the same horizontal position? Like this:
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At first I didn't really like these shapes in the background when you've posted your front. But now seeing the back everything comes together and looks great!

The only thing I'd change right now is this white box behind "Supercharged Extras". For me it's very eye-catching but doesn't fit with the rest of your back since you're onyl using gradients etc. :)
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Try having the 'Supercharged' text in italic?
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Zungam wrote:
QUOTE (Zungam @ Aug 6 2014, 12:36 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Nice!

Can you adjusted the synopsis so every line start from the same horizontal position? Like this:

Now is everything in the line ;)

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QUOTE (Fidi84 @ Aug 6 2014, 07:53 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
At first I didn't really like these shapes in the background when you've posted your front. But now seeing the back everything comes together and looks great!

The only thing I'd change right now is this white box behind "Supercharged Extras". For me it's very eye-catching but doesn't fit with the rest of your back since you're onyl using gradients etc. :)


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QUOTE (JollyRoger @ Aug 6 2014, 08:52 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Try having the 'Supercharged' text in italic?


Now Italic

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Really really like this! Only thing I would suggest is maybe to have the names on the front above the correct person?
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Awesome work JC! The name arrangement would look better as Sauron suggested. :)
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I agree with the names.
But apart from this it's great! :)
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Are you planning on adding something in the top left corner of the back, cause now it looks a bit empty.
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