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introduced small changes. Subsequent tomorrow
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I think this system is the best. I'll work on some font and tagline
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Yup, that looks like a better arrangement.
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I think ctaulbee's comments is true for the back as well.
Especially on the characters the grunge effect is to much for me.
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Yes, a little less grunge would look better :) I also think you should rearrange the synopsis so it doesn't touch the tommygun.
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Thank you for your suggestions and comments. I changed for your advice appearance and penetration face on the front and on the rear and a look of fonts in the description. Comments are welcome :)
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Very much liking this :) i just feel the front is abit to busy with all the chips and cards (might just be me tho)
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Time for another change. Fixed description. I changed the annual death toll and placement of chips and cards. I gave enough illumination face in back cover and changed the font in the title. I hope that the changes improved the appearance of the cover.
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Nice update :) i just feel again there is to much action on the front with all cards and chips, maybe try looseing a few of them and just have the odd ones on there and alter the opacity of them so they are not over taking the front (if that makes sense)
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I introduced a few changes, upload two versions of the cover. One without fusion structure on the characters and the other with a lower fusing since the last version.
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