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Post by sauron »

Looks good - in the bonus features box on the left shouldn't it read "Includes Both Formats" instead of "Includes Both Format"
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Post by Cirus »

Thanks guys! Sauron maybe you're right, I'll fix it.

Here are three front idea to the second movie. All of them have some problems.
At the first, Jeff Goldblum's head is quite uncler, and the T-rex's head is on the side, not the top.
At the second, Eddie wasn't a main character, and too many cloning.
At the third, a scene, which is put together from pieces, and too many cloning. :D
Which would be better?

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For the synopsis, I think on the movie title should be in italics, and I don't think the one title (Jurassic Park) needs to be bold or in a different color because it appears twice in the synopsis. What if only the "E" at the beginning was the center of focus in the same font as the TT but in yellow?
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Post by Cirus »

I had a better idea to The Lost World's front, so when I get home I'm going to do a fourth version. :D
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So I thought something like this, but it wasn't too good.

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It can work! I think it needs more height and the empty middle draws the eye, so maybe enlarge the composition? The T-rex might have to be around the same size as the first one. Something I noticed was that a few characters in the foreground were out of focus, and the jungle behind them is crisp even though it extends further. :)
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Post by Fidi »

My favourite of you first three fronts is the third. But Julianne Moore should be much bigger I think (as Jeff Goldblum on your first front; his head is around the upper window edge).

But I like your new version, too. The idea is great. :D
But maybe to many people. And the dinosaurs are to small (in relation to all the people) I think.
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I like your new version !!! With a bit more work on this one you have something can work ! ;)
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Thanks, maybe I'll try another dinosaurs too. This is just a quick throw together. The background is suck I know.
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And there are these the two dinosaurs, but the picture which people are pretty bad quality. I am very disappointed, I wanted three great front layout, but I continually fail with the second.

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