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This work looks super, hope you realize I'm stealing images from above for future work, not to worry it's for a trilogy I may do someday, I won't step on your great work here, promise. I wish I had half your talent though, could you spare any, hehe!
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I'm not in shape now. First of all, I don't like the back upper part and secondly I don't like my cloning on The Lost World front (actually I'm not good at it, and I haven't really forced.)

Ohh, and I boost the saturation a bit ont the first front.

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Thanks for another save, Jpeg!

Cirus, the back looks great, but I think there should be font used that mirrors the TT font and/or 3d style for the Bonus Features?

Also, the still row treatment is inspiring as always, but the blue still second from the left kind of seems out of place. Since it's the same scene as the front, would it looked better if it had the same color scheme as the front image, too?

I will also pm you layout ideas for the Lost World when I get some time. :) I love the current image, but it might have to be rotated?
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Thanks Paris.

I'll try the SF in that 3d style.

In the stil row, I want a picture from the T-rex, all of a sudden I found that picture, but I remember another pic where the colors are fit.

I look forward the layout ideas. It was quite a exhausting day, you can see in my work.
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Changed the still row and the bonus features text, but I'm still not satisfied with the upper part. I think it's too simple and sparse.

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I like it a lot!!
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Great start Cirus! One of my favorite movies of all time :thumb:
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Arkflip wrote:
QUOTE (Arkflip @ Jan 31 2014, 08:10 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I like it a lot!!

Me 2
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Me 2


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Arkflip wrote:
QUOTE (Arkflip @ Jan 30 2014, 05:10 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I like it a lot!!
Me too! (Or 4. :) )

The template looks great, and your setup for The Lost World already looks very promising. :cheers:

If you could find a way to spruce up the "An Adventure 65 Million Years in the Making." area, this would be a real knockout. :) Would it be overkill to use the Jurassic Park font/texture on that text too?

Alternatively, maybe you could make that text the same color as your spine logos, so that it's kind of neutral? Then, you could increase the saturation and/or contrast in the stills row just a little bit more. That way, you turn the less exciting top portion into a positive, and just push the attention to the great stills. :) Or, similarly, you could increase the yellow's saturation on your special features banner background to draw some more attention there.

It's going to be an outstanding design (and set), don't sell yourself short. :)
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