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Update. Left or right? :)

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Left! :) I also think that you should complete the top of the head curving into the neck with a little more cloning? I boosted the values a bit to highlight it.

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Lastly, I think you need to bring back the darker texture and remove some light from the right side of its head because it isn't blending well the the background like the rest of it. Here is a comparison to the original image:

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Whitout vignette and texts. I removed an unnecessary light and cloned the bright thing on the left. Better?

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Perfect! :D
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Nice work on this one m8 !! :D
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I put it under the microscope (again :) ) and there looks to be a minor image duplication at the bottom.
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Holy cow! I don't know how that happened. :D Fixed.
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Great job on this!!! :D :D
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Super work so far my friend, which font are you using, Jurassic Park or Rainforest Inline, I plan on a trilogy blu-ray cover, and am searching for Rainforest Inline, could you share this font if you have it?

Your imagery is amazing, I'll never match it, but love the way you always seem to find the perfect image for your creations. very Cool!
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How would it look with a saturation boost of 5-10?
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