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Very nice! :) My only suggestion would be to make the spacing between words in the synopsis consistent.
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Could you try and adjust the SF stone slab so the perspective is the same as the barcode slab?
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I'm currently on vacation out of town for the next two weeks. So unfortunately no updates from me for a while. :SHOCKED:
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Have a nice vacation mom.
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Post by M0vieM0nster »

As soon as Mich is back from vacation and settled we will have an awesome update peeps so watch this space ;)
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Post by sauron »

Looking forward to the update :)
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I'm back from vacation, and thought I would try a small update on the back.

I adjusted the SF stone slab some, not sure if that is what you meant? If I make the bevel on the left side like the Barcode you won't see it since it will be covered by the plants. But I took the bevel off the top of it? :chin:

Also worked on the synopsis a bit more.

Not sure about the red crack? :shrug:

Any better?

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Post by venome »

I like it. The red crack looks fine to me :)
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Really like the stone slaps now :D

Perhaps even more red cracks across the bottom? Some of them could be barely seen (without so much outer glow), but there?
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Post by wysmommy »

Thanks guys. I worked on the cracks a little more??

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